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Name : bob D. Bell
Age : 20
Race : human
Faction : pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 12

PostSubject: Bob D. Bell   Thu Jul 07, 2016 9:57 pm

Starting bonus :pocket change

Bob D.Bell.





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Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change

First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:
Position: 
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter


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Physical Appearance

Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs

Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
[ltr][size=15][b]Clothing and Accessories:[/b]  [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15][b]Detailed Description:[/b]  
[/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15] Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mark spells located on his right shoulder which mean greatness, and he wears dark nail polish. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him. 
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[ltr][size=15][size=18][b]The Past[/b] [/ltr][/size][/size]
 
[ltr][size=15][b]Main Traits:[/b]  [/ltr][/size]

  • Happy 
  • Honest  
  • Unexpected 


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[size=15][b]Likes:[/b]  
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  • Eating meat  
  • Building equipment 
  • The color black 


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[size=15][b]Dislikes:[/b] 
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  • watching innocent people being hurt 


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[size=15][b]Hometown:[/b] loguetown east blue 
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[size=15][b]Personality:[/b]   
[/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is angered if he sees injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]Bob isn't a judgmental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a superior if what he sees the superior is doing is wrong such as yonko ,admirals, fleet admirals and marine official etc ,  same goes with those who are of a lower rank. If Bob is challenged he would not back down from a fight.  
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[size=15]When Bob is in a battle his attitude changes to a very serious mood and he become more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill. 
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[ltr][size=15][spoiler=History] [/ltr][/size]
[ltr][size=15]Bob lived with his mother until he was 5 and from that age he wanted to be a pirate just like his father John D. Bell and wanted to go out to sea and meet him. John D. Bell was a part of a great pirate ship. Bob's father’s ship was attacked by a fleet of Navy ships. After hours of fighting on the sea, Bob's father’s ship was sunk by the navy which lead to them being captured and, since they were such great pirates, their execution. [/ltr][/size]
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[size=15]One day he was with his mother and saw her start to cry without realising that his father had been captured. His mother read the newspaper to bob of his father’s captured and executed. By losing his father, Bob realised they were people who were way stronger (since Bob used to think his father was strongest in world); therefore he made a promise to himself to train, to become stronger and stronger and look to become a great pirate. 
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[size=15]A year later his grandfather came to the island looking to pay his respect to Bob’s mother. When bob first saw his grandfather he was impressed by how he looked with huge muscles. When he came to the house he had a small chest in his possession. As he rest the chest to talk to Bob’s mother about the situation, Bob went snooping around the chest and opened it. When he opened it there was a devil fruit inside, since bob didn’t know what that was and was also hungry he dived right in to it and ate it. Before his grandfather realised Bob had eaten the whole fruit, Bob's grandfather sat and explained how devil fruits worked and which fruit he ate. From then,  Bob gained the devil fruit's powers of the sickle sickle fruit. When Bob’s grandfather realise he ate the fruit he decided to stay and train him. 
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[size=15]One day the navy came to Bob’s hometown in search of anyone associated with his father. The navy came to Bob’s house and came in with their guns, the vice admiral of the navy asked Bob what is his name? , Bob said his name with scared voice, when the vice admiral heard his name they attacked Bob with full forced, Bob ran for his life, he was chased by the navy into a corner. The navy was about to take the head of Bob but his grandfather jump between him and the blade and caught it while his mother came up from behind swinging a bat, hitting each navy in her way. Bob’s grandfather grabbed him and ran away with his mother running behind them, they ran to the docks, there was a ship with some of the other villagers on it. As they got closer to the ship they were intercepted by the navy, Bob’s grandfather and mother fought through, but there were too many navy soldier Bob’s Mother decided to stay behind and fight while her child and her father in law escaped. Bob’s grandfather escaped on the ship while his mother stayed; as Bob shed tears to watch his hometown go up in flames and his mother on her knees in shackles. 
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[size=15]The villagers were transported to a nearby town where Bob and his grandfather stayed for a year. After they recover, Bob and his grandfather travel from island to island, also after that year he read the paper and saw his mother was executed, Bob’s grandfather consoled him and told him to be strong, from since then Bob’s mission was  to take out the Navy and what they have done to him, his hometown and his family. 
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[size=15]Bob’s grandfather dies of old age when he was 19 and from there he started his adventure on the seas and to take down the navy. 
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[ltr] [size=15][/spoiler]  [/ltr][/size]
 
 
 
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Lazarus D. Eon

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Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Bob D. Bell   Sat Jul 09, 2016 4:33 am

bobbertz wrote:
Starting bonus :pocket change

Bob D.Bell.

Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change

First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Rebell Pirates
Position: Pirate Captain
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter


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Physical Appearance

Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs

Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: brown
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories: A ¾ black jeans pants with a red button up sleeveless shirt. Bob wears a pair of brown slippers. There is a piece of string is resting on Bob neck, there is a ring at end of the string that he will never go nowhere without it.

The grammar here is very poorly structured. What you might mean:

Bob wears a ¾ black jeans pants with a red buttoned up sleeveless shirt. He wears a pair of brown slippers as well to match. There is a piece of string is resting on Bob neck, there is a ring at end of the string that he will never go nowhere without it.


Detailed Description:

 Bob is a dark skin young man, who has short black spiky hair with brown eyes. He grows up with his mother and train with his grandfather at an early age due to his gaining devil fruit powers.

His love to wear sleeveless shirts since shirt with sleeves has kept his heart, as the same reason he wears those ¾ pants. His favorite color is red and his favorite food is meat. He has a small muscular physique that he gain due to his training with his grandfather.

Again, grammar here. Also, add more description please. How does he actual appear, is he youthful, is older looking? Why does he wear sleeveless shirts? What do you mean 'has kept his heart' semantically that makes no sense. Elaborate more here. 

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The Past

Main Traits:

  • Happy
  • Honest


Likes:

  • Eating Meat
  • Building Equipment

Dislikes:

  • People hurting innocent people



Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality: 

Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is a piece of meat in front of him. He always has a smile on his face, appreciates his friends and who is willing to help him. Bob will get angry if he sees injustice and will rush in to try and help the innocent people. If innocent people ask Bob for help, he will try and help. The ring around his neck means something to him and if it is lost, he will go through the lengths to get it back.

Bob isn't a judgmental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goes with those who are below his rank. If Bob is a challenge he would not back down from a fight.

when Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood and he will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill 

What about his attitude changes? is he more aggressive, does he scream alot, is a quite anger, how does Bob apply himself to these situations. Again, grammar, carefully read over everything to make sure the tenses and phrasing is correct. 


History:
 


Give me a little bit more in this summary, it starts off intriguing but then tapers off, paint a bigger picture. (You don't need thousands of words but even if you use 500 total or 800 total you'd be fine.)


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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:

  • Attack: 50
  • Defense: 50
  • Reflex: 75
  • Willpower:25



I'll hold off approving stats since you applied for Pioneer's bonus, which will give you some more exp and stats, anyway, please work on the changes in orange. 

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Name : bob D. Bell
Age : 20
Race : human
Faction : pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 12

PostSubject: Re: Bob D. Bell   Tue Jul 12, 2016 3:48 am

bobbertz wrote:
Starting bonus :pocket change

Bob D.Bell.





" />

Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change

First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Rebell Pirates
Position: Pirate Captain
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter


-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance

Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs

Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories: 

Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears.


Detailed Description:
 
Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mar which spells “greatness” is located on his right shoulder, and he wears dark nail polish.

He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past

Main Traits:

  • Happy
  • Honest
  • Unexpected


Likes:

  • Eating Meat
  • Building Equipment
  • black

Dislikes:

  •  Innocent people getting hurt
  • Navy



Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality: 

Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is anger if he saw injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back.

Bob isn't a judgemental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goeswith those who are of below he rank. If Bob is challenge he would not back down from a fight.


When Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood he become more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill


History:
 



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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:

  • Attack: 50
  • Defense: 50
  • Reflex: 75
  • Willpower:25

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Lazarus D. Eon

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Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Bob D. Bell   Wed Jul 13, 2016 5:22 am

bobbertz wrote:
Starting bonus :pocket change <---- Take this out. 

Bob D.Bell.

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Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: pocket change Pocket Change

First Name: Bob
Middle Name/Initial: D.
Last Name: Bell
Epithet: N/A
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation:
Position: 
Profession: Carpenter+ Fighter


-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance

Height: 6.2 feet
Weight: 235 lbs

Hair Style:spiky and short
Hair Color: black/white
Eye Color: red
Scars: no scars
Clothing and Accessories: 

Bob wears a black leather vest with white fur trimming, and a black choker around his neck. He also wears a pair of yellow pants with black designs on them and burgundy boots; there are spiked bracelets on his wrists and skull earrings in his ears.


Detailed Description:
 
Bob is a very lean, slightly effeminate young man with short spiky black hair on the top, and longer, straight white hair on the bottom; he has long strands of white hair framing either side of his face, with the right strand, in particular, being adorned by five maroon beads. Bob’s lower eyelashes are very prominent, and he wears dark eyeliner and plum-colored lipstick. Bob’s red Mar which spells “greatness” is located on his right shoulder, and he wears dark nail polish. <--- What does this mean? his Red Mar?

He loves to wear vest because he love to see his arms and also keep his body cool. His favourite colour is black; Bob would buy anything once it has in black, the reason for his liking black so much because it suits him.


-------------------------------------------------
The Past

Main Traits:

  • Happy
  • Honest
  • Unexpected


Likes:

  • Eating Meat
  • Building Equipment
  • black (black the color?)


Dislikes:

  •  Innocent people getting hurt
  • Navy



Hometown: Loguetown - East Blue
Personality: 

Bob is a happy young man who is always looking for a great adventure, but he is truly happy when there is piece of meat in front of him. There will always be a smile on his face and he will show appreciation to his friends. Bob is anger if he saw injustice and will try to help in the moment. Bob is someone who would help if he is being asked too .The ring around his neck is very special to him and if it is lost he will go through the lengths to get it back.

Bob isn't a judgemental person since he believes that books aren't supposed to be judged by their covers. Bob does not attack people unless they attack him or any civilian. Bob isn't afraid to have a debate with a higher-up if what he sees the higher-up is doing is wrong, same goes(space)with those who are of below he rank. If Bob is challenge he would not back down from a fight. (Higher up as in who, a pirate? a World Government official, who? Do you mean to say he has no respect for those stronger than him and is always looking for a challenge? )

When Bob is in a battle his attitude change to a very serious mood, he becomes more aggressive and hardly talks in the battle. He will fight with all of his heart and strength and with the intention to kill


History:
 



-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: sickle sickle fruit
Equipment: Links to your weapons and items go here.
Haki: This field remains blank for now unless you acquired a particular haki in the starting bonuses page.
Stats:


  • Attack: 50

  • Defense: 50

  • Reflex: 75

  • Willpower:25

    Stats are now done in a separated application please omit. Also, your level 10, you have much more stats than this.


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