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Johnny Ringo

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Name : Johnny Ringo
Epithet : Wind-up Ringo
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Devil Fruit : Bane Bane no Mi
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 310
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 163,000,000
Berries : 150,000
Posts : 7

PostSubject: Johnny Ringo   Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:53 pm

Johnny Ringo



Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: One in a Million [1%]: You may start off with level 1 Haoshoku Haki | [Pocket Change]

First Name: Johnny
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Ringo
Epithet: Wind-up Ringo
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: N/A
Position: N/A
Profession: Shipwright, Brewmaster



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Physical Appearance

Height: 5'11"
Weight: 77 kg

Hair Style: Long and straight reaching down to about his collar bone
Hair Color: Cyan
Eye Color: Cyan
Scars: N/A
Clothing and Accessories: Johnny’s choice of clothing makes him come off as a typical punk to everyone he meets. He wears a tight fitting dark blue jacket that could be considered either purple or black depending on the lighting. Besides the initial zipper to close the jacket or allow him to remove it from his body there is a zipper located on each sleeve, starting at the wrists and extending halfway to the elbow, which allow him to easily pull out anything he might be hiding in his sleeve or scratch at whatever spot might itch. Located at the collar are two buttons to keep it fastened tightly to his neck, the design of the jacket being to stick as closely to his skin as possible without restraining his movement. Over the center of the jacket towards the top is the symbol for ‘Omega’ spray painted in white, this was an addition made by Johnny to as inspiration to always try and be the best. It’s also proven to be rather effective at scaring people off from time to time. Not really being a firm believer in shirts Johnny opts to not wear one, it would be a little too hot and tight given his jacket anyway, therefore the only thing covering his upper half is the jacket. Around his waist is a standard dark brown belt worn simply because he likes it since it isn’t necessary to keep his pants from falling. His pants are the complete opposite of his jacket, being rather on the baggy side and a bright red, leading many people to believe he has absolutely no fashion sense. Of course he knows damn well his clothes don’t really match, but it makes it easy for him to stand out in a crowd and at the same time works as a sign that he’s someone that shouldn’t be messed with. Above everything though he’s comfortable in what he wears and that’s all he really cares about. His shoes come off as red to some and brown to others, being somewhere in between the color of his pants and his belt, they look like dress shoes but are more comfortable and easier to walk and maneuver in. Around the ring finger of his right hand and the middle and ring finger of his left hand Johnny wears silver rings, they don’t serve any purpose he just simply likes them.

Detailed Description: Johnny has been accused more times than he cares to remember about dyeing his hair to match his eye color but he was in fact born that way. His cyan colored hair reaches down to about his collar bone on all sides. His eyes happen to be slightly darker than his hair and his gaze has said to be piercing, making it seem like he looks straight through people instead of right at them. His eyebrows are thin and sharp and oddly enough are black in color. The bridge of his nose is rather thin and long, but adds to his strong well defined features. His mouth and ears are well proportioned to the rest of his head and also seem to be rather solid in appearance. It’s rather shocking to anyone that sees him smile due to the fact his teeth are extremely white and completely straight. Looking at his skin it’s obvious he’s white but not to the point where he appears pale, to the touch it’s rather rough from all the fighting and work he’s done.



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The Past

Main Traits:

  • Hot-headed

  • Kind-hearted

  • Lazy

  • Excitable

  • Confident

Likes:

  • Alcohol – Johnny isn’t really an alcoholic per say but he does know how to enjoy a fine drink. Besides this more often than not he’s met plenty of interesting people at bars and taverns while having a drink, so his life always seems to be more interesting with alcohol in it.

  • Fighting – Going hand in hand with drinking is violence, there’s been plenty of times where Johnny can remember getting thrown out after starting a fight or being the only one left standing and stumbling victoriously out into the streets before passing out. Besides his drunken stupidity however he enjoys actually fighting in order to grow stronger, and to him there’s also a certain thrill about engaging in combat.

  • Meeting New People – Johnny very much enjoys meeting people, but only if they actually bother to talk to him instead of avoiding him like he’s nothing more than a bad time. People are fascinating to him and of course he enjoys making friends and sharing in experiences with others. He looks forward to meeting and becoming part of a crew, it’s like being part of a family in his eyes.

  • Travelling the World – Only ever knowing where he grew up Johnny got used to the same old people and things, it made him crave something new and exciting. He jumped at the first chance to leave and now that he’s got no responsibilities and can do whatever he wants it’s great. He wants to be able to see everything the world has to offer and find his place in it, maybe he’ll even be able to make a name for himself in it.

Dislikes:

  • Marines – If there’s one thing Johnny hates it’s the marines. Although he was really never on bad terms with any of them back home he still took any chance he got to screw with them and try to teach them a lesson. They think their way is the only right one and anybody who stands up against them is evil and needs to be punished. That isn’t right, not by a long shot, people should be allowed to make their own decisions and decide what’s right. It’s not like those bastards are better than anyone else.

  • Being Underestimated – Johnny has had all kinds of people think very lowly of him and he really doesn’t like it. It’s unfair for them to think he isn’t capable of anything based on his appearance, since he can actually do a whole lot.

  • Rich People – As someone who grew up on the poor side Johnny can’t help but feel some distaste towards the wealthy. They tend to live easy sheltered lives and get everything they could ever hope for and more without having to do anything, and sometimes it’s because of the labor of people like Johnny. Quite frankly that just pisses him off.

  • Being Bored – In this aspect Johnny is kind of like a child, he hates not having anything to do and being bored. Life is too great and there’s far too many possibilities to have absolutely nothing to do and for it to be full of dull moments. He lives for excitement so the opposite of that will most likely be the death of him.

Hometown: Loguetown, East Blue
Personality: Johnny is a surprisingly kind person, but almost everyone judges him straight away as being a bad guy because of his appearance, so he tends to act like a jerk to give them what they want. Anyone who bothers to get to know him however would find that he enjoys meeting new people and making friends. He’s also very fun loving and enjoys cracking jokes, making smart-ass remarks, and of course partying. It’s also in his nature to give a helping hand to anyone he thinks needs it and all without asking for a single thing in return. As someone who usually faces harsh criticism he does his best to keep an open mind, so it doesn’t matter to him what a person looks like or where they’re from or what they’ve even been through, all he really cares about is whether or not they’re a good person. He’s a firm believer in treating others the way you want them to treat you and vice versa, so if he’s good to you he’ll expect the same courtesy, but you better believe if you do him wrong he’ll be more than happy to return the favor. He also believes in giving a person a second chance if they’ve shown that they’re deserving of it.

Johnny is extremely adventurous, having a love for traveling the world, seeing new things, and having all sorts of different experiences. Although it hasn’t always proved to be such a good thing there’s almost no such thing as a bad idea to him, if he thinks it’s plausible then he’ll almost always go for it. Despite this he hates coming off as stupid so he’ll usually think things through and look at a situation from all points of view before making a decision. There does come a time however where instinct knows best and you have to go with whatever you’re feeling, it’s paid off for him more often than not, so although he never really has a plan things usually tend to work out one way or another. He hates being told that he can’t do something because he believes that if a person tries there really isn’t anything they can’t accomplish, you’ll never know how far you get unless you try after all. There’s a certain air of fearlessness around Johnny which allows him to face whatever obstacles stand before him with absolute confidence. Maybe he’s a little on the crazy side, but it’s not like that’s such a bad thing.

Although he does his best to be understanding and kind hearted there does come a point where neither of those things will get him anywhere. Johnny happens to have a temper and can be pretty easily set off, which more often than not results in a fight, and he just doesn’t grasp the concept of holding back. He also doesn’t enjoy being in a foul mood which in a way makes him even more pissed off and turns into a huge mess. He isn’t a fan of unfair fights but at the same time he isn’t against fighting dirty if he has to, it just comes with street fighting for as long as he can remember. Plenty of people have underestimated him and regretted it, so Johnny never passes up an opportunity to improve and prove himself to others. He tries to live life to the fullest and accomplish all sorts of things, which is why he thinks his nickname is very fitting, just wind him up and watch him go.


History:
 




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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: Bane Bane no Mi
Equipment: N/A
Haki: Haoshoku, Busoshoku, Kenbonshoku
Stats:

  • Attack: 310
  • Defense: 300
  • Reflex: 270
  • Willpower: 300




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Punch D. Sundance

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Name : Punch D. Sundance
Epithet : The Red Ribbon Bandit
Age : 18
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 112

PostSubject: Re: Johnny Ringo   Mon Jul 04, 2016 1:17 am

Johnny Ringo wrote:
Johnny Ringo



Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: One in a Million [1%]: You may start off with level 1 Haoshoku Haki | [Pocket Change]

First Name: Johnny
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: Ringo
Epithet: Wind-up Ringo
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: N/A
Position: N/A
Profession: Shipwright, Brewmaster



-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance

Height: 5'11"
Weight: 77 kg

Hair Style: Long and straight reaching down to about his collar bone
Hair Color: Cyan
Eye Color: Cyan
Scars: N/A
Clothing and Accessories: Johnny’s choice of clothing makes him come off as a typical punk to everyone he meets. He wears a tight fitting dark blue jacket that could be considered either purple or black depending on the lighting. Besides the initial zipper to close the jacket or allow him to remove it from his body there is a zipper located on each sleeve, starting at the wrists and extending halfway to the elbow, which allow him to easily pull out anything he might be hiding in his sleeve or scratch at whatever spot might itch. Located at the collar are two buttons to keep it fastened tightly to his neck, the design of the jacket being to stick as closely to his skin as possible without restraining his movement. Over the center of the jacket towards the top is the symbol for ‘Omega’ spray painted in white, this was an addition made by Johnny to as inspiration to always try and be the best. It’s also proven to be rather effective at scaring people off from time to time. Not really being a firm believer in shirts Johnny opts to not wear one, it would be a little too hot and tight given his jacket anyway, therefore the only thing covering his upper half is the jacket. Around his waist is a standard dark brown belt worn simply because he likes it since it isn’t necessary to keep his pants from falling. His pants are the complete opposite of his jacket, being rather on the baggy side and a bright red, leading many people to believe he has absolutely no fashion sense. Of course he knows damn well his clothes don’t really match, but it makes it easy for him to stand out in a crowd and at the same time works as a sign that he’s someone that shouldn’t be messed with. Above everything though he’s comfortable in what he wears and that’s all he really cares about. His shoes come off as red to some and brown to others, being somewhere in between the color of his pants and his belt, they look like dress shoes but are more comfortable and easier to walk and maneuver in. Around the ring finger of his right hand and the middle and ring finger of his left hand Johnny wears silver rings, they don’t serve any purpose he just simply likes them.

Detailed Description: Johnny has been accused more times than he cares to remember about dyeing his hair to match his eye color but he was in fact born that way. His cyan colored hair reaches down to about his collar bone on all sides. His eyes happen to be slightly darker than his hair and his gaze has said to be piercing, making it seem like he looks straight through people instead of right at them. His eyebrows are thin and sharp and oddly enough are black in color. The bridge of his nose is rather thin and long, but adds to his strong well defined features. His mouth and ears are well proportioned to the rest of his head and also seem to be rather solid in appearance. It’s rather shocking to anyone that sees him smile due to the fact his teeth are extremely white and completely straight. Looking at his skin it’s obvious he’s white but not to the point where he appears pale, to the touch it’s rather rough from all the fighting and work he’s done.



-------------------------------------------------
The Past

Main Traits:

  • Hot-headed

  • Kind-hearted

  • Lazy

  • Excitable

  • Confident

Likes:

  • Alcohol – Johnny isn’t really an alcoholic per say but he does know how to enjoy a fine drink. Besides this more often than not he’s met plenty of interesting people at bars and taverns while having a drink, so his life always seems to be more interesting with alcohol in it.

  • Fighting – Going hand in hand with drinking is violence, there’s been plenty of times where Johnny can remember getting thrown out after starting a fight or being the only one left standing and stumbling victoriously out into the streets before passing out. Besides his drunken stupidity however he enjoys actually fighting in order to grow stronger, and to him there’s also a certain thrill about engaging in combat.

  • Meeting New People – Johnny very much enjoys meeting people, but only if they actually bother to talk to him instead of avoiding him like he’s nothing more than a bad time. People are fascinating to him and of course he enjoys making friends and sharing in experiences with others. He looks forward to meeting and becoming part of a crew, it’s like being part of a family in his eyes.

  • Travelling the World – Only ever knowing where he grew up Johnny got used to the same old people and things, it made him crave something new and exciting. He jumped at the first chance to leave and now that he’s got no responsibilities and can do whatever he wants it’s great. He wants to be able to see everything the world has to offer and find his place in it, maybe he’ll even be able to make a name for himself in it.

Dislikes:

  • Marines – If there’s one thing Johnny hates it’s the marines. Although he was really never on bad terms with any of them back home he still took any chance he got to screw with them and try to teach them a lesson. They think their way is the only right one and anybody who stands up against them is evil and needs to be punished. That isn’t right, not by a long shot, people should be allowed to make their own decisions and decide what’s right. It’s not like those bastards are better than anyone else.

  • Being Underestimated – Johnny has had all kinds of people think very lowly of him and he really doesn’t like it. It’s unfair for them to think he isn’t capable of anything based on his appearance, since he can actually do a whole lot.

  • Rich People – As someone who grew up on the poor side Johnny can’t help but feel some distaste towards the wealthy. They tend to live easy sheltered lives and get everything they could ever hope for and more without having to do anything, and sometimes it’s because of the labor of people like Johnny. Quite frankly that just pisses him off.

  • Being Bored – In this aspect Johnny is kind of like a child, he hates not having anything to do and being bored. Life is too great and there’s far too many possibilities to have absolutely nothing to do and for it to be full of dull moments. He lives for excitement so the opposite of that will most likely be the death of him.

Hometown: Loguetown, East Blue
Personality: Johnny is a surprisingly kind person, but almost everyone judges him straight away as being a bad guy because of his appearance, so he tends to act like a jerk to give them what they want. Anyone who bothers to get to know him however would find that he enjoys meeting new people and making friends. He’s also very fun loving and enjoys cracking jokes, making smart-ass remarks, and of course partying. It’s also in his nature to give a helping hand to anyone he thinks needs it and all without asking for a single thing in return. As someone who usually faces harsh criticism he does his best to keep an open mind, so it doesn’t matter to him what a person looks like or where they’re from or what they’ve even been through, all he really cares about is whether or not they’re a good person. He’s a firm believer in treating others the way you want them to treat you and vice versa, so if he’s good to you he’ll expect the same courtesy, but you better believe if you do him wrong he’ll be more than happy to return the favor. He also believes in giving a person a second chance if they’ve shown that they’re deserving of it.

Johnny is extremely adventurous, having a love for traveling the world, seeing new things, and having all sorts of different experiences. Although it hasn’t always proved to be such a good thing there’s almost no such thing as a bad idea to him, if he thinks it’s plausible then he’ll almost always go for it. Despite this he hates coming off as stupid so he’ll usually think things through and look at a situation from all points of view before making a decision. There does come a time however where instinct knows best and you have to go with whatever you’re feeling, it’s paid off for him more often than not, so although he never really has a plan things usually tend to work out one way or another. He hates being told that he can’t do something because he believes that if a person tries there really isn’t anything they can’t accomplish, you’ll never know how far you get unless you try after all. There’s a certain air of fearlessness around Johnny which allows him to face whatever obstacles stand before him with absolute confidence. Maybe he’s a little on the crazy side, but it’s not like that’s such a bad thing.

Although he does his best to be understanding and kind hearted there does come a point where neither of those things will get him anywhere. Johnny happens to have a temper and can be pretty easily set off, which more often than not results in a fight, and he just doesn’t grasp the concept of holding back. He also doesn’t enjoy being in a foul mood which in a way makes him even more pissed off and turns into a huge mess. He isn’t a fan of unfair fights but at the same time he isn’t against fighting dirty if he has to, it just comes with street fighting for as long as he can remember. Plenty of people have underestimated him and regretted it, so Johnny never passes up an opportunity to improve and prove himself to others. He tries to live life to the fullest and accomplish all sorts of things, which is why he thinks his nickname is very fitting, just wind him up and watch him go.


History:
 




-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: Bane Bane no Mi
Equipment: N/A
Haki: Haoshoku, Busoshoku, Kenbonshoku
Stats:

  • Attack: 310
  • Defense: 300
  • Reflex: 270
  • Willpower: 300




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This was honestly a very well fleshed out story. I felt like I got a good grasp of who Johnny was and what he stands for, however, there are two minor problems I have with your application, your stats check out however, you're Gucci on that aspect. Anything in orange is a suggestion, anything in red is something that must be edited.

1) In your history, aside from some spelling and grammatical errors, there is a lack of commas, it's literally like a wall of text. I'll just use this point for you to read through your history if you wish to correct this. Though, you don't have to, I just think with one more read through, it'll be easier on the eyes to read with addition of punctuation.

2)You spoke about Johnny going to a large library in Loguetown and discovering that he had indeed eaten the Bane Bane No Mi, yes? Well, that kind of knowledge isn't something that'd be sitting down a regular library in the blues, regardless of how large the library is. Loguetown is known for it's merchant aspect, not really a hub for historical knowledge or lore per say. Suggestion, Johnny could acquire a Devil Fruit Log from the black market or merchant's trading rare goods but it's hard to believe that information would just be sitting there in a regular East Blue Library.

Other than, it was a fantastic read. 1/2 Approved once you reword that part of the story. I have no problem him discovering what he ate but it seems unlikely that'd he'd fine it in a library and two, his character type doesn't seem to be the sort that'd rely on an institution for his knowledge acquisition, he'd hit the streets and turn over every cart, stand and kick down every dump for the information he needs.
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Johnny Ringo

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Name : Johnny Ringo
Epithet : Wind-up Ringo
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Devil Fruit : Bane Bane no Mi
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 310
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 163,000,000
Berries : 150,000
Posts : 7

PostSubject: Re: Johnny Ringo   Mon Jul 04, 2016 3:50 pm

I've made some edits, so I think everything should be to your liking now. If you come across anything else you feel needs to be fixed up just let me know and I'll do what I need to.
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Punch D. Sundance

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Name : Punch D. Sundance
Epithet : The Red Ribbon Bandit
Age : 18
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 112

PostSubject: Re: Johnny Ringo   Mon Jul 04, 2016 9:27 pm

Nothing much left to say but Grade A+ Application, Approved!
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