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Tony G. Cross

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Epithet : Don Flint
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Crew : N/A
Ship : N/A
Crew Position : N/A
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 55
Defense (DEF) : 65
Reflex (RX) : 50
Willpower (WP) : 40
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 1,050,000
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PostSubject: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Tue Mar 21, 2017 5:40 am


Kiribi Kiribi no Mi(Flint-Flint Fruit)


Devil Fruit: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
It's red all over, and yet it has odd shadings over some parts of the actual fruit that isn't actually from reflections.
Devil Fruit Description: The Flint-Flint fruit gives the user a set of abilities, there are two major parts to this devil fruit. Firstly, the user can harden their skin until it possesses properties similar to Flint, giving increased defense and offense since Flint is as hard as stone, secondly the Flint can collide with either metallic objects or another hardened limb to usually create sparks that are often hot enough to ignite flammable objects, which can include straw, clothing, bombs, etc... and certainly hurts when it comes into contact with flesh.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Hardened Defense:
 

Fiery Sparks:
 

Hardened Limb:
 

Fighting Style: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Weapon Utilization: Tony's exploding bullets, Tony's bombs and Tony's fists.
Specialization: It can be considered mixed, but it's more close-quarters then it is long-ranged.
Description: Tony's chemistry, which involves using bombs and bullets that can ignite from Tony's sparks from his Flint powers, Tony also uses his fists for fighting, which can be enhanced since Tony hardens his body, which include his fists.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 



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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1139

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Tue Mar 21, 2017 11:57 pm

[Just a few comments, all in orange.]
@Tony G. Cross wrote:

Kiribi Kiribi no Mi(Flint-Flint Fruit)


Devil Fruit: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
It's red all over, and yet it has odd shadings over some parts of the actual fruit that isn't actually from reflections.
Devil Fruit Description: The Flint-Flint fruit gives the user a set of abilities, there are two major parts to this devil fruit. Firstly, the user can harden their skin until it possesses properties similar to Flint, giving increased defense and offense since Flint is as hard as stone, secondly the Flint can collide with either metallic objects or another hardened limb to usually create sparks that are often hot enough to ignite flammable objects, which can include straw, clothing, bombs, etc... and certainly hurts when it comes into contact with flesh.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Hardened Defense:
 

Fiery Sparks:
 

Flint Fists:
 
[When we discussed the hardened limb, what I was suggesting is that you replace Flint Fists with Hardened Limb, not have both.]
Hardened Limb:
 

Fighting Style: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Weapon Utilization: Tony's exploding bullets, Tony's bombs and Tony's fists.
Specialization: It can be considered mixed, but it's more close-quarters then it is long-ranged.
Description: Tony's chemistry, which involves using bombs and bullets that can ignite from Tony's sparks from his Flint powers, Tony also uses his fists for fighting, which can be enhanced since Tony hardens his body, which include his fists.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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Enter Tracker Here Name : Tony G. Cross
Epithet : Don Flint
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Mafia(formerly)
Crew : N/A
Ship : N/A
Crew Position : N/A
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 55
Defense (DEF) : 65
Reflex (RX) : 50
Willpower (WP) : 40
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 1,050,000
Posts : 14

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Wed Mar 22, 2017 12:23 am

Edits have been made.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1139

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Wed Mar 22, 2017 6:24 am

Nicely done! Tony is now ready to tackle the sea! (As soon as his future crewmates get their shit together, that is.)



@Tony G. Cross wrote:

Kiribi Kiribi no Mi(Flint-Flint Fruit)


Devil Fruit: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
It's red all over, and yet it has odd shadings over some parts of the actual fruit that isn't actually from reflections.
Devil Fruit Description: The Flint-Flint fruit gives the user a set of abilities, there are two major parts to this devil fruit. Firstly, the user can harden their skin until it possesses properties similar to Flint, giving increased defense and offense since Flint is as hard as stone, secondly the Flint can collide with either metallic objects or another hardened limb to usually create sparks that are often hot enough to ignite flammable objects, which can include straw, clothing, bombs, etc... and certainly hurts when it comes into contact with flesh.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Hardened Defense:
 

Fiery Sparks:
 

Hardened Limb:
 

Fighting Style: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Weapon Utilization: Tony's exploding bullets, Tony's bombs and Tony's fists.
Specialization: It can be considered mixed, but it's more close-quarters then it is long-ranged.
Description: Tony's chemistry, which involves using bombs and bullets that can ignite from Tony's sparks from his Flint powers, Tony also uses his fists for fighting, which can be enhanced since Tony hardens his body, which include his fists.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1139

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Thu Sep 07, 2017 4:59 pm

Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.

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Age : 28
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Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Primetime Pirates
Ship : Big Time
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Amai Amai no Mi
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 510
Defense (DEF) : 225
Reflex (RX) : 300
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 55
Experience Points : 5500
Bounty : 225,000,000
Berries : 2,650,000


Posts : 121

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Sun Sep 17, 2017 4:10 pm

The only changes you need to make really are the cooldowns. They are all unified, you do not get to choose them yourself. No worries, however.

(Cooldown values= LT: 2, MT: 5, HT: 8, AoE: 15 posts) <-- Regardless of the level or what the techniques do.

@Tony G. Cross wrote:

Kiribi Kiribi no Mi(Flint-Flint Fruit)


Devil Fruit: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
It's red all over, and yet it has odd shadings over some parts of the actual fruit that isn't actually from reflections.
Devil Fruit Description: The Flint-Flint fruit gives the user a set of abilities, there are two major parts to this devil fruit. Firstly, the user can harden their skin until it possesses properties similar to Flint, giving increased defense and offense since Flint is as hard as stone, secondly the Flint can collide with either metallic objects or another hardened limb to usually create sparks that are often hot enough to ignite flammable objects, which can include straw, clothing, bombs, etc... and certainly hurts when it comes into contact with flesh.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Hardened Defense:
 

Fiery Sparks:
 

Hardened Limb:
 

Fighting Style: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi
Weapon Utilization: Tony's exploding bullets, Tony's bombs and Tony's fists.
Specialization: It can be considered mixed, but it's more close-quarters then it is long-ranged.
Description: Tony's chemistry, which involves using bombs and bullets that can ignite from Tony's sparks from his Flint powers, Tony also uses his fists for fighting, which can be enhanced since Tony hardens his body, which include his fists.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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TrackerBioFighting StyleEquipment

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1139

PostSubject: Re: Kiribi Kiribi no Mi   Mon Sep 18, 2017 1:37 pm

My suggestions for this would be that you replace Flint Blade with a different technique. You could turn Flint Blade into a passive/toggled ability since it doesn't actually alter your stats in any way. (And even if you want it to, you could still make it a toggled ability as long as you conform to the toggled ability rules provided in the combat guide.

For "Full Hardened Body", please list out the stat buff and debuff independently as per the new fighting style template.

And lastly, the only cooldown that really needs to be fixed is the AoE. The AoE's cooldown should be 15 posts.

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