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 Mr. Borü's Equipment

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Mr. Borü

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Enter Tracker Here Age : 0
Faction : Pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 275
Defense (DEF) : 280
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 250
Level : 40
Experience Points : 4000
Bounty : 4,800,000
Berries : 2,450,000
Posts : 32

PostSubject: Mr. Borü's Equipment   Sun Jul 03, 2016 6:23 pm

Mr. Borü's Equipment

Character Name: Borü
Number of Equipment Pieces: 1
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: 15

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Equipment Name: The Protector
Equipment Type: Shield
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: 15 Stats: Defense
Equipment Description: The protector is a very big shield with the shape of a rectangle, made out of different metals, rocks and even pieces of ice. Borü made it with his broken house, he took everything he could from the water and used it as a boat to reach land. His brothers helped him to make it, and he has made it even bigger with time. Taking anything he founds and placing it into the shield, but always leaving the logo of his family. It weights 0.80 tons. It has a 5 meters height, and a 4.5 meters width. It's name comes from its purpose, it works to protect and is was made to protect. Being as heavy as it is, Borü has been able to learn how to use it in many other ways.

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Last edited by Mr. Borü on Mon Jul 11, 2016 4:58 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Enter Tracker Here Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü's Equipment   Sat Jul 09, 2016 4:20 am

@Mr. Borü wrote:
Mr. Borü's Equipment

Character Name: Borü
Number of Equipment Pieces: 1
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: 15

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Equipment Name: The Protector
Equipment Type: Shield
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: 15 Stats: Defense
Equipment Description: The protector is a very big shield with the shape of a rectangle, made out of different metals, rocks and even pieces of ice. Borü made it with his broken house, he took everything he could from the water and used it as a boat to reach land. His brothers helped him to make it, and he has made it even bigger with time. Taking anything he founds and placing it into the shield, but always leaving the logo of his family. It weights 0.80 tons. It has a 5 meters height, and a 4.5 meters width. It's name comes from its purpose, it works to protect and is was made to protect. Being as heavy as it is, Borü has been able to learn how to use it in many other ways.

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Techniques
Equipment Techniques:
 



The shield itself is aokay, it's the techniques that concern me. Crater is an AOE Technique, mean it's range will only be 25% of the actual max radius reach, so don't forget that part. Update your description to suit and you should be fine. Tier 3 is 400m, max range so I'll allow you to edit that, to get the maximum AOE coverage, due note some with better reflexes can avoid the crack or evade to the fragments that remain but all in all good technique. 


For the second technique, Protector, I'd go with 30, 25, 20 and then anything above 440 would be defaulted as 10M. Also note, techniques like this can be subjected to the same reflex evasion vibe. Aside from that, I'll say with these changes, everything should be Gucci.


Side Note: Don't forget to update your character application so I can finish both of these in one go.

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Enter Tracker Here Age : 0
Faction : Pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 275
Defense (DEF) : 280
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 250
Level : 40
Experience Points : 4000
Bounty : 4,800,000
Berries : 2,450,000
Posts : 32

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü's Equipment   Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:12 pm

Edited. Still not sure if I modified the first technique correctly, but if I didn't just tell me and I'll change it as fast as possible.
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Lazarus D. Eon

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Enter Tracker Here Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü's Equipment   Mon Jul 11, 2016 2:34 pm

@Mr. Borü wrote:
Mr. Borü's Equipment

Character Name: Borü
Number of Equipment Pieces: 1
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: 15

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Equipment Name: The Protector
Equipment Type: Shield
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: 15 Stats: Defense
Equipment Description: The protector is a very big shield with the shape of a rectangle, made out of different metals, rocks and even pieces of ice. Borü made it with his broken house, he took everything he could from the water and used it as a boat to reach land. His brothers helped him to make it, and he has made it even bigger with time. Taking anything he founds and placing it into the shield, but always leaving the logo of his family. It weights 0.80 tons. It has a 5 meters height, and a 4.5 meters width. It's name comes from its purpose, it works to protect and is was made to protect. Being as heavy as it is, Borü has been able to learn how to use it in many other ways.

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Techniques
Equipment Techniques:
 

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Mr. Borü

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Enter Tracker Here Age : 0
Faction : Pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 275
Defense (DEF) : 280
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 250
Level : 40
Experience Points : 4000
Bounty : 4,800,000
Berries : 2,450,000
Posts : 32

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü's Equipment   Mon Jul 11, 2016 4:59 pm

Edited. Thanks!
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