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 Magar Payaku

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Enter Tracker Here Name : Magar
Epithet : Land Shark
Age : 24
Race : Human (1/4 fishman)
Faction : Pirate
Crew Position : Survivalist, Fisherman, Helmsman, Rigging Rat,
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 75
Defense (DEF) : 50
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 45
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 25

PostSubject: Magar Payaku   Thu Feb 16, 2017 12:30 pm


Magar Payaku



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Soar, Phoenix, however i'd like to claim the Super Rookie bonus instead| Starting roll

First Name: Magar
Middle Name/Initial: Rasbor
Last Name: Payaku
Epithet: Land Shark
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human (1/4th fishman)
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Fisherman, Survivalist, Navigator, Helmsman, minor-cook


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'8"
Weight: 190 (roughly)

Hair Style: Shoulder length, slightly wavy, a little messy.
Hair Color: Dark blue
Eye Color: Light/ice blue
Scars: One on the right side of his ribs from a shark bite. Other than scars, Magar has a number of tattoos about his body.
Clothing and Accessories: Magar wears pretty little in terms of clothing. Most of the time he figures he's going to end up in the water so the fisherman typically forgoes wearing a shirt. His typical attire generally consists of a pair of board shorts over top a sort of speed swimsuit/ lower half of a wet suit that goes down to his calves. Magar often wears a sort of fisherman's tool belt across his torsocontaining a variety of items useful for fishing, hooks, harpoons, extra line, etc. Magar wears a colorful sash that he ties around his waist.  On his forearms are his main weapons, a pair of gloves with spools of fishing-line wrapped on. Magar wears some simple sandals on his feet, but his feet are pretty much conditioned to the point where he usually goes bare-foot except in the most extreme conditions. Magar wears a necklace with several shells from his home island made for him by his sister and mother.

Description: Magar is very lean and muscular from years of vigorous training to become strong like his father. Some people might consider him a bit of an exhibitionist, since he rarely wears a shirt. Magar proudly displays the tattoos which are reminders of home and where he's been on his travels.


The Past


Main Traits: Adventurous, Dependable, Carefree, optimistic
Likes: Discovering New places and people, Breathtaking views, Freedom, New experiences, Sleeping under the stars
Dislikes: Strict schedules, Tight spaces, Tunnels especially, Cold climates,
Hometown: Moon Beach Island- West Blue
Personality: Magar is a very adventurous young man. With a yearning wanderlust and a goal to become the greatest fisherman takes him to all sorts of places and situations. Magar is a kind and fun-loving soul, often in a very relaxed and playful mood. Magar is incredibly optimistic, even in the face of dark situations. Magar is relatively even tempered, with a good sense of integrity. Do to him whatever you like, but if you do something that crosses his line of morality, watch out. He'll come to the aid of those suffering and in need. He aims to carry on his father's kindness. He's not out to do harm, he's just looking for the greatest adventure and the fullest life he can live.

Due to him not wearing a shirt, Magar can be considered a bit of an exhibitionist. Outside of that, he's pretty agreeable in social interactions. If asked, most of his personal information is pretty open book, save a few things he doesn't like to touch upon. His expression of the cultural norms of his home island can be seen by some as a little unorthodox.

In battle, combat to Magar is more or less a game to him where both combatants are merely preforming a dance of sorts. Unless seriously irked, Magar is quite flirty and playful with his opponent or opponents. Unless one is completely against his moral code, Magar is the type of guy to fight you and then share a drink and laugh afterwards.

Magar loves to collect and tell stories, some of his fishing stories may have some stretched truths to them. The culture of his home plays a big part in this, as many of his culture collect tattoos to create a living tapestry of the lives that they lived. Magar aims to live as full a life as he can to turn his body into a great work of art. To this extent, Magar often trains to keep his body at its peak shape and continue to grow in physical strength. Also it helps him feel good.

History:
 


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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1163

PostSubject: Re: Magar Payaku   Thu Mar 23, 2017 11:20 am

History looks good Greys. I'd just add a little bit about Orion at the very end there. Maybe some sort of promise of reuniting their father's pendant? Just to show the state of their bond as they parted ways.

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Enter Tracker Here Name : Magar
Epithet : Land Shark
Age : 24
Race : Human (1/4 fishman)
Faction : Pirate
Crew Position : Survivalist, Fisherman, Helmsman, Rigging Rat,
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 75
Defense (DEF) : 50
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 45
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 25

PostSubject: Re: Magar Payaku   Fri Mar 24, 2017 1:28 am

Aye, I believe I've made adjustments that work for me.
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TrackerBioFighting StyleEquipment

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000


Posts : 1163

PostSubject: Re: Magar Payaku   Fri Mar 24, 2017 8:18 am

I really like how you handled the brothers' parting! Exchanging their pendant halves was a great idea.



Niko wrote:

Niko X. Jewell.



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Soar, Phoenix| Starting roll

First Name: Niko
Middle Name/Initial: X
Last Name: Jewell
Epithet: The Red Storm
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Navigator/ Cartographer


Physical Appearance


Height: 8'1
Weight: Roughly around 200

Hair Style: Short, Messy Spikey
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Several on his torso, but nothing notable.
Clothing and Accessories: Niko often wears a very plain set of clothes. Oft sticking to a plain solid color V-neck T-shirt and a darker solid color pair of pants. He wears a solid black pair of boots. In colder weather he will don a grey colored long coat with lighter colored grey fur-like lining. In warmer weather he may switch out his pants for shorts and his boots for sandals. The only thing of his wardrobe that stands out is a small half of a metal emblem he wears around his neck.

Description: Niko's body is well built from the years of rigorous training for him and his brother to take over as military leaders. At over eight feet tall, with a solid build, Niko is an intimidating figure to stand against.


The Past


Main Traits: Adventurous, Dependable, Carefree, Daring
Likes: Discovering New places, Breathtaking views, Freedom, New experiences, Training
Dislikes: Rules, Strict schedules, Pushy people, Conflict, Boasting
Hometown: Polmachi Island
Personality:
From a glance, standing over eight feet tall Niko might be described as intimidating. Niko's typical stone face, hides a heart yearning for adventure and the freedom that the sea provides. Despite his physical standing out of being tall and having bright red hair, Niko doesn't actually like to stand out, causing him to dress plain to balance out his more outstanding features. His general expression often brings people to think that he's uncaring, but Niko's eyes are always watching and assessing out of habit from his upbringing. Despite Niko's intimidating size, Niko as actually a bit of a gentle giant.

Niko's smile shows up when he's being introduced to new and exciting experiences. His rare smile can brighten a room. His openness to new experiences leads to making friendly bonds easily. Though he prefers to have several really strong bonds when it comes to friends. When it comes to friends he's formed strong bonds for he is incredibly loyal and dependable. A good friend he will fight tooth and nail for, despite his disliking of conflict. Those who form a really strong bond with Niko can expect a friend until the end.

Niko spends a good portion of his days training, that is the one thing that he actively schedules. Outside of that, Niko dislikes having schedules that tell him where and when to do things. He loves the freedom that comes with adventuring on the seas. Often he can be found taking a nap. Good friends, he might do favors for if asked nicely. Overall, Niko is a pretty, go with the flow type of person.

Despite all Niko's training that he's done, He isn't all that fond of fighting or conflict. He tends to stick to his father's words of "Soldiers don't train to fight, Soldiers train to protect." Niko would prefer to talk things out to a solution, and avoid any unnecessary violence. He dislikes people that boast about their strength, but will never start over such a subject. Very rarely will Niko actively start a fight, those exceptions are typically to protect a friend's honor. When Niko ends up in combat, Niko is a tenacious fighter and very skilled from years of training.

One quirk that Niko tends to display, is when he is thinking, he will rub the split pendant on his necklace.

History:
 

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Butch Castle

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Name : Butch Castle
Epithet : No-Good
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Crew : N/A
Ship : Little Castle
Crew Position : N/A
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 0
Attack (ATK) : 80
Defense (DEF) : 50
Reflex (RX) : 85
Willpower (WP) : 50
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : 5,050,000

Posts : 82

PostSubject: Re: Magar Payaku   Thu Jan 04, 2018 7:51 pm


@Magar wrote:

Magar Payaku



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Soar, Phoenix, however i'd like to claim the Super Rookie bonus instead| Starting roll

First Name: Magar
Middle Name/Initial: Rasbor
Last Name: Payaku
Epithet: Land Shark
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human (1/4th fishman)
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Fisherman, Survivalist, Navigator, Helmsman, minor-cook


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'8"
Weight: 190 (roughly)

Hair Style: Shoulder length, slightly wavy, a little messy.
Hair Color: Dark blue
Eye Color: Light/ice blue
Scars: One on the right side of his ribs from a shark bite. Other than scars, Magar has a number of tattoos about his body.
Clothing and Accessories: Magar wears pretty little in terms of clothing. Most of the time he figures he's going to end up in the water so the fisherman typically forgoes wearing a shirt. His typical attire generally consists of a pair of board shorts over top a sort of speed swimsuit/ lower half of a wet suit that goes down to his calves. Magar often wears a sort of fisherman's tool belt across his torsocontaining a variety of items useful for fishing, hooks, harpoons, extra line, etc. Magar wears a colorful sash that he ties around his waist.  On his forearms are his main weapons, a pair of gloves with spools of fishing-line wrapped on. Magar wears some simple sandals on his feet, but his feet are pretty much conditioned to the point where he usually goes bare-foot except in the most extreme conditions. Magar wears a necklace with several shells from his home island made for him by his sister and mother.

Description: Magar is very lean and muscular from years of vigorous training to become strong like his father. Some people might consider him a bit of an exhibitionist, since he rarely wears a shirt. Magar proudly displays the tattoos which are reminders of home and where he's been on his travels.


The Past


Main Traits: Adventurous, Dependable, Carefree, optimistic
Likes: Discovering New places and people, Breathtaking views, Freedom, New experiences, Sleeping under the stars
Dislikes: Strict schedules, Tight spaces, Tunnels especially, Cold climates,
Hometown: Moon Beach Island- West Blue
Personality: Magar is a very adventurous young man. With a yearning wanderlust and a goal to become the greatest fisherman takes him to all sorts of places and situations. Magar is a kind and fun-loving soul, often in a very relaxed and playful mood. Magar is incredibly optimistic, even in the face of dark situations. Magar is relatively even tempered, with a good sense of integrity. Do to him whatever you like, but if you do something that crosses his line of morality, watch out. He'll come to the aid of those suffering and in need. He aims to carry on his father's kindness. He's not out to do harm, he's just looking for the greatest adventure and the fullest life he can live.

Due to him not wearing a shirt, Magar can be considered a bit of an exhibitionist. Outside of that, he's pretty agreeable in social interactions. If asked, most of his personal information is pretty open book, save a few things he doesn't like to touch upon. His expression of the cultural norms of his home island can be seen by some as a little unorthodox.

In battle, combat to Magar is more or less a game to him where both combatants are merely preforming a dance of sorts. Unless seriously irked, Magar is quite flirty and playful with his opponent or opponents. Unless one is completely against his moral code, Magar is the type of guy to fight you and then share a drink and laugh afterwards.

Magar loves to collect and tell stories, some of his fishing stories may have some stretched truths to them. The culture of his home plays a big part in this, as many of his culture collect tattoos to create a living tapestry of the lives that they lived. Magar aims to live as full a life as he can to turn his body into a great work of art. To this extent, Magar often trains to keep his body at its peak shape and continue to grow in physical strength. Also it helps him feel good.

History:
 

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