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Mr. Borü

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Enter Tracker Here Age : 0
Faction : Pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 275
Defense (DEF) : 280
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 250
Level : 40
Experience Points : 4000
Bounty : 4,800,000
Berries : 2,450,000
Posts : 32

PostSubject: Mr. Borü   Sun Jul 03, 2016 5:56 pm



Mr. Borü
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: Super Rookie | [Starting Bonus Roll]
First Name: Borü
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: N/A
Epithet: Mr. Borü
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Black Hand Pirates
Position: Chef
Profession: Chef
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Physical Appearance
Height: 18 Feet
Weight: 661 pounds
Hair Style: Bold.
Hair Color: Black... But bold.
Eye Color: Blue.
Scars: A scar that goes through his right eye.
Clothing and Accessories:  Borü uses a gladiator armor made by his family. An armor made out of metal gloves, one in each hand; a big belt with the symbol of his family and a pair of pants because you can be as bad as you want, but comme on, wear some pants please. He uses no shirt, and uses a special necklace so he never forgets his beloved wife. 
Detailed Description: As a way of punishement, Borü uses cold ice to burn himself. Leaving marks around his body, that way he won't forget how many people has he killed while being a pirate.
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The Past
Main Traits: 
- Kind. 
- Slow Thinking.
- Affectionate.
Likes:
- Cold: Borü likes cold, specially snow and ice. He is from a cold zone, and it remembers him about his family.
- People: Borü likes people and likes to meet new people, even if he has to kill the ones he doesn't like.
- Animals: Borü likes animals. Fluffy, cute, smelly creatures with awesome mustaches. Different versions of him.
Dislikes:
Marines: Marines are always causing Borü troubles, he thinks they are annoying with all their rules, and sometimes tries to get rid off them.
- People bigger than him: Being as big as he is makes Borü feel strong, secure. Finding someone bigger can cause him emotional problems.
Hometown: A winter lost island in the grand line
Personality: 
Mr. Borü is not the smartest pirate. Otherwise, he has the will of a thousand man. Borü acts for his own joy, he travels around the world to make himself happy, and even if he loves his family. He won't necessarily act for them or to help them. He will do what ever makes him happy. If there is anything disturbing his happiness, he will get rid of it.
Borü is a very kind person, making other people happy makes him happy. But also, as patient as he can be, if anyone seems annoying, or stupid by its own manners, don't expect Borü to ignore the presence of that being. He likes to fight and he is a very thought pirate. When he battles, he can sometimes be overconfident with himself. He will let his opponent strike some hits just so he can know how strong is he. This could cause some troubles when fighting stronger persons. Also, Borü doesn't fight with his feelings, he doesn't care about others comments. He somehow blocks himself when fighting, and he is feel less. Only in the event that someone close to him, someone very important dies, maybe then he will change, but only then.
Inside his crew, he has been thought that the strong will survive, and that the weak shall die, which is why the death of other mates won't affect him that much.
Borü doesn't drink and has a strict meat diet. He thinks alcohol weakens the body and he is convinced that the amazing amount of meat that he has eaten is the reason why he is so big. With his crew, Borü is always behind them checking that everything is okay, even during battle. If someone inside the ship annoys him, he will surely throw him to the water.
Borü is protective, kind, strong, secure, passive but also someone you wouldn't like to ave as an enemy.
History:
 
Borü is the youngest son of an 8 brother family. He was born very small and he didn't weigh that much compared to his brothers. He lived in a small island with his family for three years. A small kid with no neighbours, only him, his 7 brothers, his dad and his mom, not much to do. His dad was a known pirate, he would go for a month and bring food and money for a year. Which really didn't matter, they lived to far to do something with the money. One day when Borü got to his fourth year of joy, a big cake was waiting for him in the kitchen. Just as any other birthday, his parents and brothers took him to the kitchen with his eyes closed, and just when he opened them and his family started to sing "Happy birthday" it happened. It seemed to be an earthquake, but it wasn't, a marine ship crashed against the small island, a very big ship, bigger than his father's ship and bigger than the island. The ship didn't struggle at all, it just went all the way through the island, it broke everything, leaving nothing behind. Borü and his family took some pieces of the house so they didn't drown, but the water was too cold. His dad, he couldn't swim, Borü didn't know why, but he couldn't swim. "Dad? Why can't you swim?" "Come on dad, where you?" "Dad" "You are strong dad come out!" "He can swim! Can't you dad?" "Come on dad, come out" His seven child, trying to find his parent under the frozen water, but fruit users can't be under water. People who have eaten any kind of devil fruit won't swim. 
The cold killed one of his brother, now they were seven. The one who was born before Borü passed inside the water and then they were six. The older brother was eaten by a very big fish, so that leaves five. The next brother died starving. And the one after him was killed by the sun. Making them 3 and the mom. They arrived to land and a bullet killed the next son. Leaving mom, Borü and the other guy whom's name doesn't matter. 
In the new town, the big size of both brothers was perfect to bring the attention of other people. They started working with shows, moving heavy stuff, helping inside ships. Borü and the family he had left learned to live perfectly together. After fourteen years of losing his family, Borü lost his brother. The unnamed one joined a pirate crew, and left Borü with his mother. One year later, they stopped receiving messages from his brother and he decided to build his own pirate crew. But nobody believed in him, he was to big, and weird. Noticing the lack of people next to him, the giant man bought his own boat and started his journey through the sea all by his own. But then he found her.
Borü is someone who eats a lot of meat, and when his favorite butcher shop closed because of illegal issues, he had to find a new one. And he did. But not only a butcher shop. He also found certain person who made his life, happier. Borü kept going to the same shop, asking for the same thing and looking for the same girl. Time passed and finally Borü took her to his ship, she didn't like him but Borü is a very strong man. At the end the big man took the innocent woman to her ship and made her part of his crew. Three years passed of trying to escape from the boat, and once she almost made it. She saw a small island full of houses near the ship, at night while Borü was sleeping. She jumped from the boat into cold water. She tried to swim but it was too cold.
Something woke up Borü, a feeling of sadness, like he had lost something, someone. He ran through the ship looking for the girl, he wanted to call her but didn't know her name. When he saw the silhouette of a person under the water, he didn't even thought about it and jumped. It was her, drowning. He took her out from the water and swam to the island.
After saving killing a woman whose name Borü never knew, he decided to make a change. Yes, she died, couldn't save her. He took his ship and sold it. With the money from his ship he opened a butcher shop that soon would turn into a big restaurant. He found the love of his life, and this time he made sure that he wouldn't kill her, that he would protect her as any way he could. They had a lovely daughter and lived happily ever after. It was just matter of time that Borü found a new pirate crew and started once again his journey through the sea...
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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: --
Equipment: The Protector
Haki: --
Stats:
Attack: 250 +25 (Super Rookie)
Defense: 280
Reflex: 200
Willpower: 250
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Enter Tracker Here Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü   Fri Jul 08, 2016 3:04 pm

@Mr. Borü wrote:


Mr. Borü
Basic Character Information
Starting Bonus: Super Rookie | [Starting Bonus Roll]
First Name: Borü
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Last Name: N/A
Epithet: Mr. Borü
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Black Hand Pirates
Position: Chef
Profession: Chef
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Physical Appearance
Height: 18 Feet
Weight: 661 pounds
Hair Style: Bold.
Hair Color: Black... But bold.
Eye Color: Blue.
Scars: A scar that goes through his right eye.
Clothing and Accessories:  Borü uses a gladiator armor made by his family. An armor made out of metal gloves, one in each hand; a big belt with the symbol of his family and a pair of pants because you can be as bad as you want, but comme on, wear some pants please. He uses no shirt, and uses a special necklace so he never forgets his beloved wife. 
Detailed Description: As a way of punishement, Borü uses cold ice to burn himself. Leaving marks around his body, that way he won't forget how many people has he killed while being a pirate.
-------------------------------------------------
The Past
Main Traits: 
- Kind. 
- Slow Thinking.
- Affectionate.
Likes:
- Cold: Borü likes cold, specially snow and ice. He is from a cold zone, and it remembers him about his family.
- People: Borü likes people and likes to meet new people, even if he has to kill the ones he doesn't like.
- Animals: Borü likes animals. Fluffy, cute, smelly creatures with awesome mustaches. Different versions of him.
Dislikes:
Marines: Marines are always causing Borü troubles, he thinks they are annoying with all their rules, and sometimes tries to get rid off them.
- People bigger than him: Being as big as he is makes Borü feel strong, secure. Finding someone bigger can cause him emotional problems.
Hometown: A winter lost island in the grand line
Personality: 
Mr. Borü is not the smartest pirate. Otherwise, he has the will of a thousand man. Borü acts for his own joy, he travels around the world to make himself happy, and even if he loves his family. He won't necessarily act for them or to help them. He will do what ever makes him happy. If there is anything disturbing his happiness, he will get rid of it.
Borü is a very kind person, making other people happy makes him happy. But also, as patient as he can be, if anyone seems annoying, or stupid by its own manners, don't expect Borü to ignore the presence of that being. He likes to fight and he is a very thought pirate. When he battles, he can sometimes be overconfident with himself. He will let his opponent strike some hits just so he can know how strong is he. This could cause some troubles when fighting stronger persons. Also, Borü doesn't fight with his feelings, he doesn't care about others comments. He somehow blocks himself when fighting, and he is feel less. Only in the event that someone close to him, someone very important dies, maybe then he will change, but only then.
Inside his crew, he has been thought that the strong will survive, and that the weak shall die, which is why the death of other mates won't affect him that much.
Borü doesn't drink and has a strict meat diet. He thinks alcohol weakens the body and he is convinced that the amazing amount of meat that he has eaten is the reason why he is so big. With his crew, Borü is always behind them checking that everything is okay, even during battle. If someone inside the ship annoys him, he will surely throw him to the water.
Borü is protective, kind, strong, secure, passive but also someone you wouldn't like to ave as an enemy.
History:
 
Borü is the youngest son of an 8 brother family. He was born very small and he didn't weigh that much compared to his brothers. He lived in a small island with his family for three years. A small kid with no neighbours, only him, his 7 brothers, his dad and his mom, not much to do. His dad was a known pirate, he would go for a month and bring food and money for a year. Which really didn't matter, they lived to far to do something with the money. One day when Borü got to his fourth year of joy, a big cake was waiting for him in the kitchen. Just as any other birthday, his parents and brothers took him to the kitchen with his eyes closed, and just when he opened them and his family started to sing "Happy birthday" it happened. It seemed to be an earthquake, but it wasn't, a marine ship crashed against the small island, a very big ship, bigger than his father's ship and bigger than the island. The ship didn't struggle at all, it just went all the way through the island, it broke everything, leaving nothing behind. Borü and his family took some pieces of the house so they didn't drown, but the water was too cold. His dad, he couldn't swim, Borü didn't know why, but he couldn't swim. "Dad? Why can't you swim?" "Come on dad, where you?" "Dad" "You are strong dad come out!" "He can swim! Can't you dad?" "Come on dad, come out" His seven child, trying to find his parent under the frozen water, but fruit users can't be under water. People who have eaten any kind of devil fruit won't swim. 
The cold killed one of his brother, now they were seven. The one who was born before Borü passed inside the water and then they were six. The older brother was eaten by a very big fish, so that leaves five. The next brother died starving. And the one after him was killed by the sun. Making them 3 and the mom. They arrived to land and a bullet killed the next son. Leaving mom, Borü and the other guy whom's name doesn't matter. 
In the new town, the big size of both brothers was perfect to bring the attention of other people. They started working with shows, moving heavy stuff, helping inside ships. Borü and the family he had left learned to live perfectly together. After fourteen years of losing his family, Borü lost his brother. The unnamed one joined a pirate crew, and left Borü with his mother. One year later, they stopped receiving messages from his brother, he decided to join his own pirate crew. But nobody believed in him, he was to big, and weird. Noticing the lack of people next to him, the giant man bought his own boat and started his journey through the sea. 
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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: --
Equipment: --
Haki: --
Stats:
Attack: 250 +25 (Super Rookie)
Defense: 290
Reflex: 200
Willpower: 250
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Boru~~~ ...  Boru-kun!!!!! ;~~~~~;. I loved his story and the face claim is so atypical that it went back with all the struggles he's been through. Only one tiny peeve: 

One year later, they stopped receiving messages from his brother, he decided to join his own pirate crew. But nobody believed in him, he was to big, and weird. Noticing the lack of people next to him, the giant man bought his own boat and started his journey through the sea. 


You can't exactly join something that doesn't exist, I think you mean he went off on his own and started his own pirate crew. Aside from that, your stats are the next problem.


39+ Levels is 780
Base Stats is 200
That's 980.
Plus your super rookie, that'd be 1005. 


Currently your base stat + 39 levels are adding up to 990. And with the plus 25, that'd be 1015. 
Once you've correct that, I can give you the okay. 1/2 Approval. Interesting Application, I'm feeling a Strong B, would've like a little bit more from his history but I feel I'll see that in RP's in the future. 

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Enter Tracker Here Age : 0
Faction : Pirate
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 275
Defense (DEF) : 280
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 250
Level : 40
Experience Points : 4000
Bounty : 4,800,000
Berries : 2,450,000
Posts : 32

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü   Sat Jul 09, 2016 3:02 pm

I had to write something more in his story, I never talked about his present family but I tried to make it quick... Yeah... Anyway, I finished thanks Caesar, I'm glad you liked it c':
I also corrected that small mistake with the stats and the text. Again thanks c:
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Enter Tracker Here Name : Lazarus. D. Eon
Epithet : Northern Star
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : -
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : San San No Mi - Acid Acid Parameica
Haoshoku : 5
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 5
Attack (ATK) : 440
Defense (DEF) : 320
Reflex (RX) : 270
Willpower (WP) : 325
Level : 56
Experience Points : 5600
Bounty : 295,000,000
Berries : 20,200,000
Posts : 117

PostSubject: Re: Mr. Borü   Sat Jul 09, 2016 5:34 pm

All Gucci, nice addition o// ^___^

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