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Mazin

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Name : Mazin Botros
Epithet : Water Walking
Age : 15
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin (a.k.a. “Pompoko Pirates”)
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Kilo Kilo no Mi
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 310
Defense (DEF) : 290
Reflex (RX) : 345
Willpower (WP) : 265
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Berries : 22,050,000
Posts : 31

PostSubject: Kilo Kilo No Mi   Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:23 am


Kilo Kilo no Mi


Devil Fruit: Kilo Kilo no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: A very, very strange looking gourd.  But quite curvy.  If one were fruitsexual, it'd be the sexiest of gourds, with a long, long stem that seemed to possess an hourglass figure of its own only to reveal a bodacious body. It was tan around the stem, and blue along its base, with little orange spots covering its frame.  

Devil Fruit Description: The Kilo Kilo no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to change their weight from 1 to 10,000 kilograms without affecting the his or her mass / overall size, instead changing the force of gravity upon the user's body. The user, however, is unaffected by the gravitational force itself, capable of moving normally. 

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: When at his normal weight, this Fruit grants Mazin no bonuses. For every day use, no one would probably notice until the user accidentally broke a chair. However, some natural advantages and disadvantages will be listed below for altered weights, and the result of training with them.

Lightweight Movement: Occurs naturally when weight is lowered.  While in use, his jumps become as if he jumped in lower-gravity, sending him off to massive heights at great speed. For better or worse, any force at all could send him flying while lighter, really. He can, however, walk on fragile surfaces without worry, climb up twigs, and make it across quicksand without much problem. He can even walk or run across water, a feat only normally possible if a human had enormous feat to distribute their weight, or if he or she moved at incredible speed. Although, if submerged, hes still as screwed as any other Devil Fruit user.

But what if you need a little dangerous activity to get your jollies?  Well – a pressure plate designed to trigger when someone steps on it?  Unless it was meant to detect a kitten, he won’t set it off. Nor would his movement leave much in the way of tracks or sound. He could even safely walk on top of a group of nails when nearing weightlessness. Of course, good luck stomping out that massive bug you just found while in such a state…

Heavy Movement: And that’s where this comes in. While heavy, the user of this fruit seems to not suffer much in the way of fall damage, which is mighty convenient because everything below certainly does. Never again will you need an elevator to get down from your luxury suite...Oh wait. Oops.

The flip side to lightweight movement applies here. While the user may still move normally, any time in the air under what is essentially high gravity conditions is going to send him plummeting back down in no time at all.  Increased weight can be a plus, though.  Do you embrace your time as a Sumo Wrestling God (til Ton Ton Fruit or Giants drop by -cry-), or do you find some poor animal to serve as your mount while you weigh 10 tons?  That’s as much as the second lightest Colossus!

In all seriousness, being heavy may make him pretty difficult to move if he doesn't want to, let alone be lifted by someone who isn't physically trained. And if you need to catapult someone some distance away out of combat -- why, make the boy jump on the other side!

Limited Flight:  One already familiar from canon.  By using an object like a balloon, umbrella, or widespread cloth, a Lightweight Mazin may float and/or glide in the air.

Unnatural Balance (Tier 2):  As a result of manipulating one’s weight, balance is something that can always be kept in mind.  While the user can still move normally under a high-gravity environment, his or her surroundings, most importantly what is being walked on, are still a factor. Standing on the handrails of a ship while heavy makes for a good training exercise for this, for instance, and as a result, Mazin is a tight-rope champion.  

Fighting Style: Mixed Martial Arts (main base: Rokushiki)
Specialization: Mostly Melee, Some Ranged
Description: Taught to Mazin while he was with Orion, this fighting style works primarily from Rokushiki’s base with other things he picked up along his travels or through experimentation. His Devil Fruit’s weight manipulation ability lends itself toward some concepts better than others, though. For instance,  by increasing his weight and bracing himself he could form an incredibly strong Tekkai, and  decreasing his weight, thereby weakening the force of gravity on his body, would greatly enhance the effect Geppou, especially in combination with Soru, making Mazin an excellent combatant in the air.  

Most importantly, though, is being heavy in particular is a huge advantage for martial arts, enough so that despite Mazin’s young age, hes been able to keep up with opponents far more well developed than him.  Putting your weight into a blow can be given a whole new meaning with this Fruit.





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Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 



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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Kilo Kilo No Mi   Tue Jan 03, 2017 12:32 pm

Excellently balanced techniques, and LOL. Love the references, especially the 10-ton balloon hammer.

Had to strain my eyes to find something to correct, for without asking for corrections, I couldn't very well hold my title of "your friendly neighborhood tyrant", could I?

Only two things I noticed so far.

Tekkai/Iron Body: You forgot to include durations for this. Unless it's only meant to last against a single attack, in which case, clarify that the immobility applied to you is either during the use of that technique or for however long afterward.

Jawbreaker/Backbreaker: While the Butt-shigan is bloody awesome (not literally, I hope), I hope that the "OHKO" is only there for comedic purposes, and not accurately describing the technique's offensive prowess. After all, how easily you knock someone out will be determined by the difference in your attack vs their defense.

Everything else was very well-balanced and worthy of a gold star, if I had one to give.

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Name : Mazin Botros
Epithet : Water Walking
Age : 15
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin (a.k.a. “Pompoko Pirates”)
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Kilo Kilo no Mi
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 310
Defense (DEF) : 290
Reflex (RX) : 345
Willpower (WP) : 265
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Berries : 22,050,000
Posts : 31

PostSubject: Re: Kilo Kilo No Mi   Tue Jan 03, 2017 1:00 pm

Fixed Tekkai, sorry about that. Had another technique in that slot and forgot to edit the duration.

Jawbreaker: Ah, lol.  I’ll make sure to make it clear that he actually hits the back, rather than the butt. Hemorrhoids are a pain in the…

Nevermind.  Can’t even joke on that one. I was attempting to play on Oda saying a Butt Shigan would be one, and as a sort of meta joke that the universe is like *handslap* "No Mazin. Bad."
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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Kilo Kilo No Mi   Tue Jan 03, 2017 1:13 pm

Mazin wrote:
Fixed Tekkai, sorry about that. Had another technique in that slot and forgot to edit the duration.

Jawbreaker: Ah, lol.  I’ll make sure to make it clear that he actually hits the back, rather than the butt. Hemorrhoids are a pain in the…

Nevermind.  Can’t even joke on that one. I was attempting to play on Oda saying a Butt Shigan would be one, and as a sort of meta joke that the universe is like *handslap* "No Mazin. Bad."

Hemorrhoids are never a joking matter. Shame on you!



And since I did mention a gold star, but was too lazy to find a thematic one (I actually Googled "Gold star butt tattoo", but only found sexy butts with cheesy, girly tattoos), here it is:





Mazin wrote:

Kilo Kilo no Mi


Devil Fruit: Kilo Kilo no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: A very, very strange looking gourd.  But quite curvy.  If one were fruitsexual, it'd be the sexiest of gourds, with a long, long stem that seemed to possess an hourglass figure of its own only to reveal a bodacious body. It was tan around the stem, and blue along its base, with little orange spots covering its frame.  

Devil Fruit Description: The Kilo Kilo no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to change their weight from 1 to 10,000 kilograms without affecting the his or her mass / overall size, instead changing the force of gravity upon the user's body. The user, however, is unaffected by the gravitational force itself, capable of moving normally. 

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities: When at his normal weight, this Fruit grants Mazin no bonuses. For every day use, no one would probably notice until the user accidentally broke a chair. However, some natural advantages and disadvantages will be listed below for altered weights, and the result of training with them.

Lightweight Movement: Occurs naturally when weight is lowered.  While in use, his jumps become as if he jumped in lower-gravity, sending him off to massive heights at great speed. For better or worse, any force at all could send him flying while lighter, really. He can, however, walk on fragile surfaces without worry, climb up twigs, and make it across quicksand without much problem. He can even walk or run across water, a feat only normally possible if a human had enormous feat to distribute their weight, or if he or she moved at incredible speed. Although, if submerged, hes still as screwed as any other Devil Fruit user.

But what if you need a little dangerous activity to get your jollies?  Well – a pressure plate designed to trigger when someone steps on it?  Unless it was meant to detect a kitten, he won’t set it off. Nor would his movement leave much in the way of tracks or sound. He could even safely walk on top of a group of nails when nearing weightlessness. Of course, good luck stomping out that massive bug you just found while in such a state…

Heavy Movement: And that’s where this comes in. While heavy, the user of this fruit seems to not suffer much in the way of fall damage, which is mighty convenient because everything below certainly does. Never again will you need an elevator to get down from your luxury suite...Oh wait. Oops.

The flip side to lightweight movement applies here. While the user may still move normally, any time in the air under what is essentially high gravity conditions is going to send him plummeting back down in no time at all.  Increased weight can be a plus, though.  Do you embrace your time as a Sumo Wrestling God (til Ton Ton Fruit or Giants drop by -cry-), or do you find some poor animal to serve as your mount while you weigh 10 tons?  That’s as much as the second lightest Colossus!

In all seriousness, being heavy may make him pretty difficult to move if he doesn't want to, let alone be lifted by someone who isn't physically trained. And if you need to catapult someone some distance away out of combat -- why, make the boy jump on the other side!

Limited Flight:  One already familiar from canon.  By using an object like a balloon, umbrella, or widespread cloth, a Lightweight Mazin may float and/or glide in the air.

Unnatural Balance (Tier 2):  As a result of manipulating one’s weight, balance is something that can always be kept in mind.  While the user can still move normally under a high-gravity environment, his or her surroundings, most importantly what is being walked on, are still a factor. Standing on the handrails of a ship while heavy makes for a good training exercise for this, for instance, and as a result, Mazin is a tight-rope champion.  

Fighting Style: Mixed Martial Arts (main base: Rokushiki)
Specialization: Mostly Melee, Some Ranged
Description: Taught to Mazin while he was with Orion, this fighting style works primarily from Rokushiki’s base with other things he picked up along his travels or through experimentation. His Devil Fruit’s weight manipulation ability lends itself toward some concepts better than others, though. For instance,  by increasing his weight and bracing himself he could form an incredibly strong Tekkai, and  decreasing his weight, thereby weakening the force of gravity on his body, would greatly enhance the effect Geppou, especially in combination with Soru, making Mazin an excellent combatant in the air.  

Most importantly, though, is being heavy in particular is a huge advantage for martial arts, enough so that despite Mazin’s young age, hes been able to keep up with opponents far more well developed than him.  Putting your weight into a blow can be given a whole new meaning with this Fruit.





Techniques





Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Kilo Kilo No Mi   Thu Sep 07, 2017 4:54 pm

Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.

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