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 Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

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Laurel O’Halloran

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Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Race : Human
Faction : Pirates
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 6
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 40

PostSubject: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Tue Dec 27, 2016 11:24 pm


Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30

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Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Opera Gloves with concealed thief tools
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description:. While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1115

PostSubject: Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:10 am

Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".

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Laurel O’Halloran

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Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Race : Human
Faction : Pirates
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 6
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 40

PostSubject: Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:33 pm

Done and done - I've actually shot for a Defense debuff, as there's also potential for the skill to setting up an ambush, so I'd rather not gimp that.

Also changed the name of Loguetown Fog to something slightly more fitting thematically. Overnight headaches while working have a way of clouding judgement. /pun

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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1115

PostSubject: Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:40 pm

You forgot the second fix~
Gray wrote:
Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".

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Laurel O’Halloran

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Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Race : Human
Faction : Pirates
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 6
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 40

PostSubject: Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:43 pm

Huh, so I did. Welp, that's fixed now too!

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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1115

PostSubject: Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment   Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:55 pm



Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30

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Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Opera Gloves with concealed thief tools
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description:. While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.

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