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Baltroy

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Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army (Commander)
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Commander
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 315
Reflex (RX) : 350
Willpower (WP) : 285
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 150,000,000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 43

PostSubject: Flying Darts   Sun Dec 18, 2016 2:25 am


Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


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Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 





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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 926

PostSubject: Re: Flying Darts   Sun Dec 18, 2016 1:23 pm

[Overall an extremely well-written fighting style! And you balanced it really well too~ There were some things that I noticed that could use a bit of tweaking though. These comments will be in orange.]

Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


Techniques


Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 




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Baltroy

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Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army (Commander)
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Commander
Haoshoku : 0
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 4
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 315
Reflex (RX) : 350
Willpower (WP) : 285
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 150,000,000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 43

PostSubject: Re: Flying Darts   Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:05 pm

Bump~ I have a question on Iaculum ex Vigore too >_>

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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 926

PostSubject: Re: Flying Darts   Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:47 pm

You are now officially ready to start your adventure!

Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


Techniques


Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 




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