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Rangoon

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Name : Rangoon
Epithet : Black Hand
Age : 46
Race : Fishman
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Black Hand Pirates
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 280
Defense (DEF) : 200
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 300,400,000
Berries : 350,000
Posts : 18

PostSubject: Rangoon   Thu Jun 30, 2016 10:13 pm

Tatsuma C. Rangoon



Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)

First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Hand" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very good at tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.



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Physical Appearance

Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.

Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman (Pygocentrus piraya). He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.


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The Past

Main Traits:

  • Intelligent
  • Grumpy
  • Agressive
  • Sadistic

Likes:

  • Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.
  • Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
  • Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.

Dislikes:

  • Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
  • Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
  • High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far from tall places is something he fears.

Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows a fight can be won even before starting. He is very smart and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way of thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.

History:
 




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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:

  • Attack: 280
  • Defense: 200
  • Reflex: 200
  • Willpower: 500



Last edited by Rangoon on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:09 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Rangoon   Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:06 pm

Rangoon turned out to be even more ruthless than I'd originally thought. Nonetheless, our first fishman is almost ready. The corrections are marked in [orange].

Rangoon wrote:
Tatsuma C. Rangoon



Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)

First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Fist" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very [at] good tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.



-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance

Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color:  N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.

Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman [Include which type of fishman he is, for example: whale fishman, shark fishman, blowfish fishman]. He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.


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The Past

Main Traits:

  • Wise
  • Grumpy
  • Agresive[Aggressive]

Likes:

  • Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.[If this is true, include "Sadistic" in your traits.]
  • Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
  • Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.

Dislikes:

  • Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
  • Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
  • High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far[from] tall places is something he fears.

Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows aa fight can be won without even fighting.[This kinda conflicts with your like of "hurting others". If Rangoon likes hurting others, then he should instead be fighting even if he can win without it.] He is very wise and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way [of] thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.

History:
 




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Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:

  • Attack: 280
  • Defense: 200
  • Reflex: 200
  • Willpower: 500

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Rangoon

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Name : Rangoon
Epithet : Black Hand
Age : 46
Race : Fishman
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Black Hand Pirates
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 280
Defense (DEF) : 200
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 300,400,000
Berries : 350,000
Posts : 18

PostSubject: Re: Rangoon   Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:35 pm

Fixed
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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Rangoon   Fri Jul 01, 2016 9:43 pm

You've missed a bunch of corrections Rangoon. Look for them carefully. Don't rush it. And please proof-read!
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Rangoon

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Name : Rangoon
Epithet : Black Hand
Age : 46
Race : Fishman
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Black Hand Pirates
Ship : -
Crew Position : Captain
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 280
Defense (DEF) : 200
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 300,400,000
Berries : 350,000
Posts : 18

PostSubject: Re: Rangoon   Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:10 pm

I think I corrected everything now
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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Cyborg
Faction : Yonkou (Former)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Former)
Ship : Fistful AKA "The Fist" (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haoshoku : 9
Busoshoku | Kenbunshoku : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Berries : 25,000,000,000
Perks :

Posts : 1101

PostSubject: Re: Rangoon   Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:38 pm

Here comes the first Fishman and Shichibukai!



Rangoon wrote:
Tatsuma C. Rangoon



Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: Haoshoku (One in a million)

First Name: Rangoon
Middle Name/Initial: C.
Last Name: Tatsuma
Epithet: "Black Fist" Rangoon
Age: 46
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman
Faction: Pirate
Affiliation: Not Yet
Position: Shichibukai
Profession:
Tracker: Rangoon is very good at tracking people or any living beings down, specially in the ocean because of his experience as a fishman pirate.
Navigator: With the years passing, he has learned to navigate the ship, however, he doesn't like doing it and prefers to have someone to navigate instead of him.



-------------------------------------------------
Physical Appearance

Height: 12.5 feet, 3.8 meters
Weight: 652 pounds, 295 kilograms

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color:  N/A
Eye Color: Black
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Rangoon usually wears a big brown jacket which just nearly fits him and some white pants. He uses a pair of suspenders in x shape but are not added to his pants, instead, they end up crossing again behind. These suspenders can be used to carry weapons as well. As in footwear, he uses a pair of black boots. When he jumps into the water, he usually does without any clothes on top nor his suspenders and only keeps the pants without the boots.

Detailed Description: Rangoon is a Fishman (Pygocentrus piraya). He has a big, very muscular body which is covered by scales to make it harder. His body is purple and he has a pair of horns in his face, one pointing up and one pointing down. In his arms, he has some sort of big fin which can be used to fight giving him a minimum range in his blunt attacks.


-------------------------------------------------
The Past

Main Traits:

  • Intelligent
  • Grumpy
  • Agressive
  • Sadistic

Likes:

  • Fighting: It entertains him to hurt other living beings.
  • Fish: Eating fish is that he likes, it's his favorite meal but he usually doesn't cook it.
  • Blood: He actually likes drinking blood which is why he likes to take the bodies of those he kills with him.

Dislikes:

  • Weakness: He hates seeing weak living beings. He thinks only the strong ones deserve to survive.
  • Losing: It makes him feel weak, and again, he can't tolerate weakness in any form.
  • High Places: He is used to being in water, a place where he can't actually fall, so just falling far from tall places is something he fears.

Hometown: Fishman Island
Personality: Rangoon is quite a terrifying looking guy. He hardly smiles or laughs and has a very hard and deep voice which in combination with his physical appearance, makes him look quite terrifying. He likes to cause fear because he knows a fight can be won even before starting. He is very smart and always knows when to fight an enemy and when to avoid a fight. He also knows how to fight someone trying to find their weak spots and exploiting them, however, this mentality isn't just used in combat, but instead, he constantly uses it in his day to day life. Even his presence is by itself aggressive, constantly causing some sort of fear aura which usually affect weaker people. He likes fighting by himself and believes in warrior's honor which means he will never break the rules in a fight. As a superior in his crew, he takes no orders and instead exploits his crew to do anything he wants and sometimes even punishing the weak ones to show his superiority. To understand his way of thinking, you must also understand his philosophy about only the strong ones surviving. He strongly believes that only does who are strong enough may survive and may even reject petitions for help from his own crew.

History:
 




-------------------------------------------------
Combat Statistics
Fighting Style: -
Equipment: -
Haki: Haoshoku
Stats:

  • Attack: 280
  • Defense: 200
  • Reflex: 200
  • Willpower: 500

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